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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring 72EA
Dear Ali, How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. I received you email last night about your visiting planning to India along with you inquiries. As of now, I'm staying in Mehdipatnam with is the pub of all the commercial business. I love the idea of you staying with me in my house. My apartment has a spare room down the hall. It is a better option than spending extra money on accommodation. Once you arrive here make sure that you have received all the luggage. I can come and pick you up without any difficulty but if you like to explore alight then take the shutter bus service available on the airport. The bus will drop you at the station, which is 5 minutes walk from my house. As you maybe aware that India is a tropical country make sure to pack all the cotton and light weight dresses. Avoiding bring any warm clothing as the chances for their use is almost zero. If you are planning to bring any medicine make sure that the drugstore has provided you an receipt, you need to bring it along. Cannot wait to meet you. Huma
Dear Ali, How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. I received you email last night about your visiting planning to India along with you inquiries.

As of
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now
, I'm staying in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Mehdipatnam
with is the pub of all the commercial business. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of you staying with me in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. My apartment has a spare room down the hall. It is a better option than spending extra money on accommodation.

“Once” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Once
you arrive here
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that you have received all the luggage. I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and pick you up without any difficulty
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
if you like to explore alight then take the shutter bus service available on the airport. The bus will drop you at the station, which is 5 minutes walk from my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

As you
The word "maybe" is and adverb. Either a verb is missing or you meant "may be".
maybe
aware that India is a tropical country
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure to pack all the cotton and
Did you mean "lightweight"?
light weight
dresses. Avoiding bring any warm clothing as the chances for their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
is almost zero. If you are planning to bring any medicine
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that the drugstore has provided you
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
receipt, you need to bring it along.

Cannot wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Huma
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IELTS letter An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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