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Work is done on street where you live. the noise is disturbing you write a letter to of complaint to local concil. #introduce yourself #explain what problem is #suggest solutions

Work is done on street where you live. the noise is disturbing you write a letter to of complaint to local concil. #introduce yourself #explain what problem is #suggest solutions naJP
Dear sir, I am resident of 1805 Victoria park avenue apartment number 101 and I would like to draw your attention toward the problem which are facing by individual of my area. I am living with my family and me and my husband both are engaged in earning of bread and butter. Actually, a week ago road construction work has been started by guild construction company as they usually worked during night time but local people are in trouble. Numerous people are doing day shifts in my apartment. Due to loud noise of machines such as roller machine, persons can not able to take enough sleep. Yesterday, my boss was mad on me as my work efficiency going down due to lack of proper sleep. Moreover, children are also unable to wake up according to school schedule. I requested to manager of guild construction, but he was not ready for any adjustments. As per my concern, construction work can be continue daytime and even they will be able to work in effective way under the sunlight. I hope you will take step to resolve this issue. Yours faithfully, Lily
Dear sir,

I am resident of 1805 Victoria park avenue apartment number 101 and I would like to draw your attention toward the problem which are facing by individual of my area. I am living with my family and me and my husband both
are engaged
in earning of bread and butter.

Actually, a week ago road
construction
work
has been
started
by guild
construction
company
as they
usually
worked during
night time
but
local
people
are in trouble. Numerous
people
are doing day shifts in my apartment. Due to loud noise of machines such as roller machine, persons can not able to take
enough
sleep. Yesterday, my boss was mad on me as my
work
efficiency going down due to lack of proper sleep.
Moreover
, children are
also
unable to wake up according to school schedule.

I requested to manager of guild
construction
,
but
he was not ready for any adjustments. As per my concern,
construction
work
can be
continue
daytime and even they will be able to
work
in effective way under the sunlight.

I hope you will take step to resolve this issue.

Yours
faithfully
,

Lily
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IELTS letter Work is done on street where you live. the noise is disturbing you write a letter to of complaint to local concil. #introduce yourself #explain what problem is #suggest solutions

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