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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away DRJW
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing this letter to request to take leave from the work for couple of weeks in January. I have to go away for two weeks from 4th of January to 18th of January to look after my father while undergoing his heart surgery on the 4th of January. Let me explain my situation in detail. During the last week of December 2019, my father suffered from the heart failure, when we reach to the hospital, doctor gave him medicines and did the ECG test. Followed by series of treatments like Angioblast and Angiography, because we able to reach to the hospital on time, doctors managed to save his life. Now, experts are suggesting to undergo heart surgery to ensure my father do not suffer from the heart attack in the future, and this will take as long as 15 days in the hospital. So, I need at least 15 days of holidays from my work so that can I can secure the life of my father. Could I suggest you how my work could be covered while I’m away? The project I’m working on has a team of six, if every member volunteer to do extra work which is obviously a part of my work then this won’t affect the productivity and timeline of the project. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Bhavesh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing this letter to request to take
leave
from the
work
for couple of weeks in January. I
have to
go away for two weeks from 4th of January to 18th of January to look after my father while undergoing his
heart
surgery on the 4th of January.

Let
me
explain
my situation in detail. During the last week of December 2019, my father suffered from the
heart
failure, when we reach to the hospital, doctor gave him medicines and did the ECG
test
. Followed by series of treatments like
Angioblast
and Angiography,
because
we
able to reach to the hospital on time, doctors managed to save his life.
Now
, experts are suggesting to undergo
heart
surgery to ensure my father do not suffer from the
heart
attack in the future, and this will take as long as 15 days in the hospital.
So
, I need at least 15 days of holidays from my
work
so
that can I can secure the life of my father.

Could I suggest you how my
work
could
be covered
while I’m away? The project I’m working on has a team of six, if every member volunteer to do extra
work
which is
obviously
a part of my
work
then this won’t affect the productivity and timeline of the project.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Bhavesh
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IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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  American English
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228 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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