Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Your friend is an expert in international food and is going to publish a book soon. Write a letter to him describing a special dish from your country.

Dear Joe It seems like ages since I’ve heard from you. I understand from Bill that you’re writing a book on international cuisine. Can I suggest you include a recipe for roast beef and Yorkshire pudding in the UK chapter? It really is the ultimate British dish as it’s not just the meal we traditionally have for Sunday lunch, but it’s what most people think of when they think of British cooking. While I suppose the beef is simple enough, the Yorkshire pudding is quite something and a real local delicacy and your book wouldn’t be complete without it. It’s so traditional we eat it all year round, although I suppose it’s really a winter meal to be eaten in front of a good log fire. Anyway, I hope you don’t get too stressed by the book and that it gets published on time. When it does come out, I hope you’ll remember your old friend and send me a copy. Hope to hear from you soon, George
Dear Joe

It seems like ages since I’ve heard from you. I understand from Bill that you’re writing a book on

international cuisine.

Can I suggest you include a recipe for roast beef and Yorkshire pudding in the UK chapter? It
really
is the

ultimate British dish as it’s not
just
the meal we
traditionally
have for Sunday lunch,
but
it’s what most

people
think
of when they
think
of British cooking. While I suppose the beef is simple
enough
, the

Yorkshire pudding is quite something and a real local delicacy and your book wouldn’t be complete

without it. It’s
so
traditional we eat it all year round, although I suppose it’s
really
a winter meal to
be eaten


in front of a
good
log fire.

Anyway, I hope you don’t
get
too
stressed
by the book and that it
gets
published on time. When it does

come
out, I hope you’ll remember your
old
friend and
send
me a copy.

Hope to hear from you
soon
,

George
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter Your friend is an expert in international food and is going to publish a book soon. Write a letter to him describing a special dish from your country.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: