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Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming?

Task-1, Dear Sir/Madam, I travelled in your Boeing 501 Jet airways on 5thof February 2021. My name is Amita Dholakia, my seat number was H 21. I lost my laptop bag during my travel from London to Vancouver. I remembered when I reached to my house and started finding my laptop. I realised that I kept my bag besides my compartment on upper side of seat, when I stepped out from aircraft I forgot to pick up from their. My bag looks like bag pack, it is in pink color. It has spider man drawing on the cover with chain in small one compartment and other two are big compartments. It has total 3 compartments in my bag. In addition to these, My bag contains valuable belongings like laptop, a book which is about history of Ram, one steel water bottler of Cello company, One pen and notebook. Notebook is one of most needed thing as it is about my company details and running projects outcome and it is security data. So, I recommend you to please, find it on quick pace as early as possible. I am eagerly waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, Amita Dholakia.
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Dear Sir/Madam,

I travelled in your Boeing 501 Jet airways on 5thof February 2021. My name is
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Amita
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Dholakia
, my seat number was H 21. I lost my laptop
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bag
during my travel from London to Vancouver. I remembered when I reached to my
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house
and
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started
finding my laptop.
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I
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realised
that I
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kept
my
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bag
besides
my
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compartment
on upper side of seat, when I stepped out from aircraft I forgot to pick up from their.

My
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bag
looks like
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bag
pack, it is in pink color. It has spider
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man
drawing on the cover with chain in
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small
one
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compartment
and other two are
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big
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compartments
. It has total 3
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compartments
in my bag.

In addition
to these, My
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bag
contains valuable belongings like laptop, a book which is about history of Ram, one steel water bottler of Cello
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company
, One pen and notebook. Notebook is one of most needed thing as it is about my
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company
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details
and running projects outcome and it is security data.

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So
, I recommend you to
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please
, find it on quick pace as early as possible.

I am
eagerly
waiting for your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming?

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  American English
9 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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