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Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion. Write -When and where is the party -give some details about what is going to happen at the party -tell him/her what you have been doing recently

Dear Himaja, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. It has been a long time since we met and have a chill time out together. I am writing to invite you for a reunion of the class of 2011. The get together is planned on 27th of February at 11. 00am in the Kona convention hall, which is very much familiar for all of our classmates. We will be having a lot of fun, remembering our school days, eating delicious food from our favorite cuisine, the Kona kitchen. Since we finished our school, we are unable to catch up as everyone is busy with their careers and I am ecstatic to see you there. I completed my Chartered accountancy course last year, and after that I started working as a assistant manager in Cargill Business Services Ltd in finance department. As I am planning to move abroad in the near future, I thought it’s good to meet you once before leaving. Hoping to see you seen! Yours lovingly, Ravi
Dear
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Himaja
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Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. It has been a long time since we met and have a chill time out together. I am writing to invite you for a reunion of the
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class
of 2011.

The
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get
together
is planned
on 27th of February at 11. 00am in the
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Kona
convention hall, which is
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very
much familiar for all of our classmates. We will be having
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a lot of
fun, remembering our school days, eating delicious food from our favorite cuisine, the
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Kona
kitchen. Since we finished our school, we are unable to catch up as everyone is busy with their careers and I am ecstatic to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you there.

I completed my Chartered accountancy course last year, and after that I
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started
working as
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
assistant manager in Cargill Business Services Ltd in finance department. As I am planning to
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move
abroad in the near future, I
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thought
it’s
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good
to
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meet
you once
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before
leaving.

Hoping to
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see
you
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seen
!

Yours
lovingly
, Ravi
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IELTS letter Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion. Write -When and where is the party -give some details about what is going to happen at the party -tell him/her what you have been doing recently

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  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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