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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays in your letter you should explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit and ask for suggestions for sightseeing options

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays in your letter you should explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit and ask for suggestions for sightseeing options 3Non

Dear Sam I hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter to inform you that my family and me is planning to travel your country. As you know my summer vacations are approaching and it is immensely hot these days. Therefore, we want to stay in cold country and will spend almost one month. There are plethora of places in London to visit. We will explore most of them like Tower of London, British museum etc. Being a cricket buff, I want to visit Lords stadium, its magical feel is unmissable and unmistakable. I really need your assistance to travel local places of interest, enjoying taste of London city and a full day to go on shopping. I hope you will provide a detail information so that I can plan my trip well-ahead. Eagerly waiting for your reply. Give my warm regards to your family. Yours Simon.

Dear Sam

I hope you are doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. I am writing this letter to inform you that my family and me is planning to travel your country. As you know my summer vacations are approaching and it is immensely
 hot these days. Therefore
, we want to stay in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 country and will spend almost one month.

There are plethora of places in London to visit. We will explore most of them like Tower of London, British museum etc. Being a cricket buff, I want to visit Lords stadium, its magical feel is unmissable and unmistakable. I really
 need your assistance to travel local places of interest, enjoying taste of London city and a full day to go on shopping.

I hope you will provide a detail information This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can plan my trip well-ahead. Eagerly
 waiting for your reply. Give my warm regards to your family.

Yours Simon. 

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays in your letter you should explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit and ask for suggestions for sightseeing options

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

149 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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