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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Apologize for damaging the product .Explain what happened . Say how are you going to fix the issue.

Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Apologize for damaging the product. Explain what happened. Say how are you going to fix the issue. Y76m
Dear Sir, Hope you are pink in your health. It took a long time to even talk to you, firstly I am feeling sorry about not returning your ear phones due to some circumstances. Here, I am writing about what happened to it and what I am now supposed to do for it. The ear phone I had taken from you was your favourite one but unfortunately its one of the buds had lost and the speakers are also not working properly. Moreover, the wire has also cut from one place and the internal wires are now appearing which puts an adverse impact on its appearance. I really feel embrace for this act but it has happened by mistake. Now I am going to replace your gadget but it gets failure to buy same colour of that company. I sure you to give the similar one in next month. Once again I apologize for not sending your thing on time and also damaged it. we will meet soon. Yours Truly, Michal
Dear Sir,

Hope you are pink in your health. It took a long time to even talk to you,
firstly
I am feeling sorry about not returning your ear phones due to
some
circumstances. Here, I am writing about what happened to it and what I am
now
supposed to do for it.

The ear phone I had taken from you was your
favourite
one
but
unfortunately its one of the buds had lost and the speakers are
also
not working
properly
.
Moreover
, the wire has
also
cut
from one place and the internal wires are
now
appearing which puts an adverse impact on its appearance. I
really
feel embrace for this act
but
it has happened by mistake.

Now
I am going to replace your gadget
but
it
gets
failure to
buy
same
colour
of that
company
. I sure you to give the similar one in
next
month. Once again I apologize for not sending your thing on time and
also
damaged it.

we
will
meet
soon
.

Yours
Truly
,

Michal
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Apologize for damaging the product. Explain what happened. Say how are you going to fix the issue.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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