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You applied to a job, were offered the position, but have decided not to accept the offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor with whom you interviewed. In your letter: • Explain the reason why you are declining the offer Describe your reasons for staying with your current position • Express your gratitude

You applied to a job, were offered the position, but have decided not to accept the offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor with whom you interviewed. In your letter: • Explain the reason why you are declining the offer Describe your reasons for staying with your current position • Express your gratitude KwoK0
Dear Ms. Barry, I am writing to you regarding your job offer as an HRIS Manager to your company, Oracle Solutions Inc. I regret to inform you that I am declining your offer and I would no longer continue my application process. After weeks of careful thinking and thorough consideration, I have decided to continue my professional career at my current employer, FujilFilm Business Solutions. Fortunately, they have offered me a new position as a Senior Manager for Asia Pacific, and a pay increase of 40% with additional benefits. I would like to thank you for the great opportunity you have given me. Although the outcome was not what we have expected, I am still grateful for the job offer you have presented to me. Once again, my sincere apologies for declining your offer, and I hope that you find more suitable person perfect for the job. Sincerely, Mariel Loto
Dear Ms. Barry,

I am writing to you regarding your job
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offer
as an
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HRIS
Manager to your
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company
, Oracle Solutions Inc. I regret to inform you that I am declining your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offer
and I would no longer continue my application process.

After weeks of careful thinking and thorough consideration, I have decided to continue my professional career at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
employer,
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FujilFilm
Business Solutions.
Fortunately
, they have offered me a new position as a Senior Manager for Asia Pacific, and a pay increase of 40% with additional benefits.

I would like to thank you for the great opportunity you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
me. Although the outcome was not what we have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
, I am
still
grateful for the job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offer
you have presented to me.

Once again, my sincere apologies for declining your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offer
, and I hope that you find more suitable person perfect for the job.

Sincerely
,

Mariel
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Loto

IELTS letter You applied to a job, were offered the position, but have decided not to accept the offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor with whom you interviewed. In your letter: • Explain the reason why you are declining the offer Describe your reasons for staying with your current position • Express your gratitude

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