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confirmation letter to the bank regarding to overdraw penalty

confirmation letter to the bank regarding to overdraw penalty r8Bym

Dear Madam/SirI am writing this letter regarding to the reciept that you send few days ago. The letter state that my account was overdraw $240 and should pay $70 penalty which will directly taken from my account. I would like to give some explanation about this. Last week, I tried to withdraw $500 from ATM mechine, but it seem that the ATM was error. At the first trial, The screen show that the transaction is fail and give a command to repeat it once more. Luckely, the second attemt was succesfully, however in the end of process I saw that I have been taken $1000 from my account. I have been inform the bank about this mistake a couple of days ago throught hot line call. Because the error came from the bank, it is not fair if I charge $ 70 and you should disminish it. I would like you to cross check my information and I will return $240 to the Bank using online tranfer. SincerelyArta

Dear Madam/Possible spelling mistake found.SiriSirSireSariSirsIRI
SirI
Did you mean "am I"?am I
am
 writing this letter The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".regardingregard to
regarding to
 the Possible spelling mistake found.receipt
reciept
 that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 few days ago. The letter state that my account was Consider using a past participle here: "overdrawn".overdrawn
overdraw
 $240 and should pay $70 penalty which will directly
 taken from my account. I would like to give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 explanation about this. Last week, I tried to withdraw $500 from ATM Possible spelling mistake found.machineme chine
mechine
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it Did you mean "seems"?seems
seem
 that the ATM was error. At the first
 trial, The screen This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 that the transaction is fail and give a command to repeat it once more. Possible spelling mistake found.Luckily
Luckely
, the second Possible spelling mistake found.attemptattest
attemt
 was Possible spelling mistake found.successfully
succesfully
, however
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of process I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 that I have been taken
 $1000 from my account. I have been Consider using a past participle here: "informed".informed
inform
 the bank about this mistake a couple of days ago Possible spelling mistake found.throughthought
throught
 hot line call. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 the error came from the bank, it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
 if I charge The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: "$70".$70
$ 70
 and you should Possible spelling mistake found.diminish
disminish
 it. I would like you to cross This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my information and I will return $240 to the Bank using online Possible spelling mistake found.transfer
tranfer
. Possible spelling mistake found.
SincerelyArta