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A friend who lives in another country has invited you come and stay with them on your next holiday. However, you have to cancel your trip due to personal reasons

A friend who lives in another country has invited you come and stay with them on your next holiday. However, you have to cancel your trip due to personal reasons oRKJX

Dear Jack. I am writing you because I will not be able to see you on the next Independence Day. Anyway I am really thankful to you remembered me and call me to spent this holidays with your family. I know that it was a big opportunity to us meeting again after a long time but will not be possible this time. Maybe if you are available we can try the next holiday, what do you think? I will not be able to go, because I will have to work on this holiday. My boss ask if was possible to me work due the final phase that we are in the business project and we are some days behind the schedule. So, I will have to work to guarantee the end of the project on the schedule. The great news is that I am on a process to a higher position on the company and I think the success of this project can help me to get this promotion. Keep in touch. Cheers Vinicius

Dear Jack.

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because
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see
 you on the next
 Independence Day. Anyway I am really
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to spent
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big
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but
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?

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because
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have to
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, I will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 work to guarantee the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the project on the schedule.

The great news is that I am on a process to a higher position on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the success of this project can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 this promotion.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
Keep
 in touch.

Cheers

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