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A school trip with your class

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Hi Ann, As I told you last week, I have just gone on a school trip. It was much more than I have imagined! We went to an art gallery - what I didn't expect. Since I am a nerd in art, I was extremely exciting. What I am really surprised about is its appearance. It doesn't look as ancient as other museums. When you take the first step, you can already see multiple interesting things that may impress you. Visitors can feel a novelty here due to its modern technology. You can immediately sense the soul of the painting at first glance. We have also learned about the kind of schools. It was such an amazing trip. I also heard that your school is going to organize a trip for seventh-grader. Remember to tell me about that.
Hi Ann,

As I
told
you last week, I have
just
gone on a school trip. It was much more than I have imagined! We went to an art gallery
-
what I didn't
expect
. Since I am a nerd in art, I was
extremely
exciting.

What I am
really
surprised about is its appearance. It doesn't look as ancient as other museums. When you take the
first
step, you can already
see
multiple interesting things that may impress you. Visitors can feel a novelty here due to its modern technology. You can immediately sense the soul of the painting at
first
glance. We have
also
learned about the kind of schools. It was such an amazing trip. I
also
heard that your school is going to organize a trip for seventh-grader. Remember to
tell
me about that.
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IELTS letter A school trip with your class

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  American English
3 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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