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Write a letter to the school. In your letter • ask about the school • say what kind of accommodation you want • mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

Write a letter to the school. In your letter • ask about the school • say what kind of accommodation you want • mention any special requests you have (for example diet). XEXBw
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is John from Delhi, India. I recently register at your college for 4 year masters in Advance Computer technology starting from October. I am writing this letter to discuss regarding my accommodation in England during my tenure. I would prefer a room with native speaker student, which will help me to improve English and also get to know the country. I would expect the room near the college so that I will spend less time to commute between room and college. Last year I studied as Business Analyst and stayed in USA with an American roommate, he helped in understanding the native culture. I am hoping same experience in England. I’d really appreciate if my fellow roommate is a vegetarian since I had very bad experience during my stay in USA. I’m allergic to shell seafoods and don’t like non-vegetarian. I look forward to hearing back from you soon. Your faithfully, Mark
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is John from Delhi, India. I recently register at your college for 4 year masters in Advance Computer technology starting from October.

I am writing this letter to discuss regarding my accommodation in England during my tenure.
I
would prefer a room with native speaker student, which will
help
me to
improve
English and
also
get
to know the country.
I
would
expect
the room near the college
so
that I will spend less time to commute between room and college. Last year I studied as Business Analyst and stayed
in USA
with an American roommate, he
helped
in understanding the native culture. I am hoping same experience in England.

I’d
really
appreciate if my fellow roommate is a vegetarian since I had
very
bad
experience during my stay
in USA
.
I
’m allergic to shell seafoods and don’t like non-vegetarian.

I
look forward to hearing back from you
soon
.

Your
faithfully
,

Mark
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the school. In your letter • ask about the school • say what kind of accommodation you want • mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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