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Apologies to your business partner

Apologies to your business partner VYRNK
Dear Mrs Anna I want to apologize for missing your business presentation on Saturday. It was very unresponsible moment on my part to not inform you on time. I would like you to know that I was in Tashkent in order to be examined my health that I had felt heavy pain on my right shoulder. I know how busy you are, and missing a presentation according to some business advice would require a lot of planning on your part. I totally respect your time. I want to assure you it will not happen again. I usually make my partners informed if I am unable to make an appointment. I regret that I could not inform you ahead of time. I am very sorry if I caused you any trouble. Please let me know if I can do anything else to help you. You have your next motivational business presentation coming Thursday. I look forward to seeing you then. If you need to visit me before that, please let me know exactly when you would like to schedule your presentation Thank you for your patience. Should you have any concerns, please contact me. Yours Sincerely, {Your Maftuna}
Dear Mrs Anna

I want to apologize for missing your business presentation on Saturday. It was
very
unresponsible
moment on my part to not inform you on time. I would like you to
know
that I was in Tashkent in order to
be examined
my health that I had felt heavy pain on my right shoulder.

I
know
how busy you are, and missing a presentation according to
some
business advice would require
a lot of
planning on your part.
I
totally
respect your time.
I
want to assure you it will not happen again.
I
usually
make
my partners informed if I am unable to
make
an appointment.
I
regret that I could not inform you ahead of time.
I
am
very
sorry if I caused you any trouble.

Please
let
me
know
if I can do anything else to
help
you. You have your
next
motivational business presentation coming Thursday. I look forward to seeing you then. If you need to visit me
before
that,
please
let
me
know
exactly when you would like to schedule your
presentation


Thank you for your patience. Should you have any concerns,
please
contact me.

Yours
Sincerely
,

{Your
Maftuna
}
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IELTS letter Apologies to your business partner

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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