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I am writing this letter to give you some advice and help you

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Dear Mosa, I am writing this letter to give you some advice and help you to enjoy your time in my city. So, let's speak about the most important places you should visit in Cairo. Firstly, you do not have to book any night in a hotel because my flat is free and you will save a lot of money, My home is located in the center of the city, Therefor, you will be near to all historical places and also the dowentown. In addition, visit the Egyptian museum that is so fantastic and also you have it get boat trip in Nile river that will give you a lot of relaxation feeling. My advice to you bring summer clothes with you because the weather is too hot here in Cairo most of time and do not trust for any sales person in the street. I look forward to your happy response in your trip. Warm wishes, Mohamed Elshafey

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I look forward to your happy response in your trip.

Warm wishes,

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