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Afriendyoumadewhileyouwerestudyingabroadhaswritentoaskyouforhelpinfindingajobinyourcountr.Youhaveheardaboutajobinalocal companythatmightbesuitablefor him/her Writealettertothisfriend.Inyourletter tellyourfriendaboutthejobandwhatsorofworkitinvolves •saywhyyouthinkthejobwouldbesuitableforhim/her •explaihowtoapplyforthejob

Afriendyoumadewhileyouwerestudyingabroadhaswritentoaskyouforhelpinfindingajobinyourcountr. Youhaveheardaboutajobinalocal companythatmightbesuitablefor him/her Writealettertothisfriend. Inyourletter tellyourfriendaboutthejobandwhatsorofworkitinvolves •saywhyyouthinkthejobwouldbesuitableforhim/her •explaihowtoapplyforthejob we1dr
Dear Vania, I am writing to inform you that, recentlly I came across a job opening in an accounting firm located in the same building where in am currently residing. The company is looking for a fresher, who has recently done US GAAP from a reputed American university and could manage a account receivables of small and medium scale firms. In our recent conversation, as you mentioned that you have completed your masters in international accounting and looking for job opportunities in a foreign countery, this position seems a perfect match. You also don’t need to worry about the accomodation as I have a spare room and we can share the apartment. To apply for the job, the first thing you need to do is to upload your resume on the company website, along with previous work experience certificate. You also need to send self attesting copies of you academic certificates. I will sent you the company website and address along with the advertisement through a mail. If you need any further information, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Your friend Gourav
Dear Vania,

I am writing to inform you that,
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recentlly
I came across a job opening in an accounting firm located in the same building where in am
currently
residing. The
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company
is looking for a fresher, who has recently done US
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GAAP
from a reputed American university and could manage
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a
account receivables of
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small
and medium scale firms.

In our recent conversation, as you mentioned that you have completed your masters in international accounting and looking for job opportunities in a foreign
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countery
, this position seems a perfect match.

You
also
don’t
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need
to worry about the
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accomodation
as I have a spare
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room and
we can share the apartment.

To apply for the job, the
first
thing you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to do is to upload your resume on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
website, along with previous work experience certificate. You
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to
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send
self attesting copies of you academic certificates. I will
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sent
you the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
website and address along with the advertisement through a mail.

If you
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need
any
further
information,
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please
don’t hesitate to contact me.

Your friend

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Gourav
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IELTS letter Afriendyoumadewhileyouwerestudyingabroadhaswritentoaskyouforhelpinfindingajobinyourcountr. Youhaveheardaboutajobinalocal companythatmightbesuitablefor him/her Writealettertothisfriend. Inyourletter tellyourfriendaboutthejobandwhatsorofworkitinvolves •saywhyyouthinkthejobwouldbesuitableforhim/her •explaihowtoapplyforthejob

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