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Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him.Write a letter replying to your friend's offer.In your letter: explain what you know about your friend's company, choose whether you accept or decline the offer, give reasons for your choice

Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him. Write a letter replying to your friend's offer. In your letter: explain what you know about your friend's company, choose whether you accept or decline the offer, give reasons for your choice exb7

Dear Miller, It is so great to hear from you after such a long time. Hope you are doing well with your work and family. Anyway, I am delighted and flattered about the fact that you have actually thought me as a prospective business partner of yours and invited to work with you at your travel agency. By the way, I know how you have worked for several travel companies before starting your own company at a small office about 5 years ago. Today, with your hard works, and with more than 500, 000 (in US dollars) yearly business turnover, your travel agency has managed to establish itself as one of the most successful small businesses and innovative entrepreneurs of our country. Besides, your customer retention rate is phenomenal, especially, among the travellers who fly to East Europe. But, despite all this success of your business, I will have to turn down your offer to work with you as in the capacity of a Deputy General Manager of your company, primarily because I can’t leave my elderly parents all by themselves in my town. Besides, I like my current job. Hope you will understand. I hope we can meet soon and spend some good time together. Warm wishes, Roger Kyle

Dear Miller,

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Warm wishes,

Roger Kyle