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In the contemporary era, jobs is an essential part in everyone life to fulfil their desire needs. As per said this notion, many post-graduates around the world ,cannot find an appropriate job according to the chosen profession. This essay will enlighten what are the causes of this scenario and will provide underlining solutions in forthcoming paragraphs The primary reason is considered as,there are limited seats available in any profession,so that's why it is very hard to find a professional job among people. To demonstrate a recent survey concluded by "Tribune" newsletter revealed that around 60% of University graduates across the world, are unemployed due to lesser opportunities as well as experience. Secondly, many organisations hire employees according to quota system,due to this,some masses are unemployed when they select candidates. The second scenario behind this notion is that,there are many solutions to tackle with situations. firstly,it is the responsibility of the governm

In the contemporary era, jobs is an essential part in everyone life to fulfil their desire needs. As per said this notion, many post-graduates around the world, cannot find an appropriate job according to the chosen profession. This essay will enlighten what are the causes of this scenario and will provide underlining solutions in forthcoming paragraphs The primary reason is considered as, there are limited seats available in any profession, so that's why it is very hard to find a professional job among people. To demonstrate a recent survey concluded by "Tribune" newsletter revealed that around 60% of University graduates across the world, are unemployed due to lesser opportunities as well as experience. Secondly, many organisations hire employees according to quota system, due to this, some masses are unemployed when they select candidates. The second scenario behind this notion is that, there are many solutions to tackle with situations. firstly, it is the responsibility of the governm yqgJ
In the contemporary era, jobs is an essential part in everyone life to fulfil their desire needs. As per said this notion, many post-graduates around the world, cannot find an appropriate job according to the chosen profession. This essay will enlighten what are the causes of this scenario and will provide underlining solutions in forthcoming paragraphsThe primary reason is considered as, there are limited seats available in any profession, so that's why it is very hard to find a professional job among people. To demonstrate a recent survey concluded by "Tribune" newsletter revealed that around 60% of University graduates across the world, are unemployed due to lesser opportunities as well as experience. Secondly, many organisations hire employees according to quota system, due to this, some masses are unemployed when they select candidates. The second scenario behind this notion is that, there are many solutions to tackle with situations. firstly, it is the responsibility of the government to increase the level of income as well as provide all facilities to the students, who wants to work in organisation. Secondly authorities should open more companies towards University graduates in the areas to reduce the problem which they face to find the employment. For instance, according to recent survey, out of 60%, 30%students around the World easily find a job, due to certain solution which have taken by administration in the country. In conclusion, jobs scarcity is inclining rapidly but there are some alternative which is more helpful to tackle with this situation.
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the problem which they face to
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, due to certain solution which have taken by administration in the country.
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IELTS letter In the contemporary era, jobs is an essential part in everyone life to fulfil their desire needs. As per said this notion, many post-graduates around the world, cannot find an appropriate job according to the chosen profession. This essay will enlighten what are the causes of this scenario and will provide underlining solutions in forthcoming paragraphs The primary reason is considered as, there are limited seats available in any profession, so that's why it is very hard to find a professional job among people. To demonstrate a recent survey concluded by "Tribune" newsletter revealed that around 60% of University graduates across the world, are unemployed due to lesser opportunities as well as experience. Secondly, many organisations hire employees according to quota system, due to this, some masses are unemployed when they select candidates. The second scenario behind this notion is that, there are many solutions to tackle with situations. firstly, it is the responsibility of the governm

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