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This is part of a letter you receive from an English penfriend: “I am lucky because my school is really good and usually I love it. But some days, I just hate it! What are the good and bad things about going to your school?” Write a letter answering your penfriend’s question in about 100 words on your worksheet.

This is part of a letter you receive from an English penfriend: “I am lucky because my school is really good and usually I love it. But some days, I just hate it! What are the good and bad things about going to your school? ” Write a letter answering your penfriend’s question in about 100 words on your worksheet. PrARB
Thanks you for your letter. It was great to hear from you. You asked me about my school. Actually, I really like and proud of my university I am majoring in English at Danang University of Foreign Languages. My school has many professional teachers and the lecturers are always enthusiastic to help students. In addition, the school has a large and airy campus along with a modern library with a lot of good and useful books. However, my university is far from the town where I live, so the traffic is quite difficult, so my friends and I have to rent a house to study and live in the city, so it costs a lot of money
Thanks you
for your letter. It was great to hear from you. You asked
me


about
my school. Actually, I
really
like and proud of my university

I am majoring in English at
Danang
University of Foreign Languages.

My school has
many
professional teachers and the lecturers are always

enthusiastic
to
help
students.
In addition
, the school has a large and

airy campus along with a modern library with
a lot of
good
and useful

books.
However
, my university is far from the town where I
live
,
so
the

traffic is quite difficult,
so
my friends and I
have to
rent a
house
to study

and
live
in the city,
so
it costs
a lot of
money
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IELTS letter This is part of a letter you receive from an English penfriend: “I am lucky because my school is really good and usually I love it. But some days, I just hate it! What are the good and bad things about going to your school? ” Write a letter answering your penfriend’s question in about 100 words on your worksheet.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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