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Write an email to your friend about your stay, and the object you left behind

Write an email to your friend about your stay, and the object you left behind LG5jp

Dear Irving, You won’t believe what happen in my class school trip this weekend. I just come to a high mountain to camp for the school trip with my class on this Saturday. After finish the tent and the camp fire, me and my class just sit a round the camp fire and talk about many thing that happen to us but when a boy said that he heard that this mountain have a bear and there is a case that a group of people have been mising and when the police try to find the answer, they found many bear footprint and blood of the 1 of the people in the group. But when him almost finish his story we noticed that some thing is making noise in the bush and then accidentaly a big shadow come out of the bush and growl, I were scaried but then I see that just our teacher and he colab with my friend to prank the class. Don’t you wish you’d been there? Must dash to see if there anyone were so surprise and got injured. Your Friend, Kiet

Dear Irving,

You won’t believe what happen in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 school trip this weekend.

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just
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come
 to a high mountain to camp for the school trip with my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 on this Saturday. After finish the tent and the camp fire, me and my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
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just
 sit a round the camp fire and talk about Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: "many things".many things
many thing
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but
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this mountain have
 a bear and there is a case that a group of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have been Possible spelling mistake found.miningmissingrisingmixingmimingmusing
mising
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many
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people
 in the group. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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some thing
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accidentaly
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big
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come
 out of the bush and growl, I Did you mean "was"?was
were
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scaried
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but
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see
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just
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colab
 with my friend to prank the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
.

Don’t you wish you’d been there? This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
Must
 dash to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 if Please check whether a verb is missing here or whether 'there' should be 'their'.their anyone
there anyone
 were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 surprise and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 injured.

Your Friend,

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Kiet