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why you like the job, why you are the right person for the job, your skills

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Dear mr Smith, I am writing this letter with the purpose of applying for the job posted on the website of your company. According to the recruiting announcement the vacant position is the CFO. To begin with, I would like this job because of the responsibilities required and the people you get in contact with. In fact, considering that this is a high position in the company you come across other people of your level, creating a valuable network of friends. Furthermore, I consider myself the right person for this job because of my MBA in management and my past experiences as CFO of an international company. As far as my personal skills are concerned, recently I have attended a public speaking course which has helped me to master the way I communicate. Moreover, in my last job I developed leader skills which became a key asset of my personality. To conclude, I would be available for an interview at any which is suitable for you. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need further information. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, Yours sincerely, Francesco
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posted on the website of your
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. According to the recruiting announcement the vacant position is the CFO.

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with, I would like this
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of the responsibilities required and the
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people
you
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in contact with. In fact, considering that this is a high position in the
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company
you
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across other
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people
of your level, creating a valuable network of friends.
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, I consider myself the right person for this
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job
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because
of my MBA in management and my
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past experiences
as CFO of an international
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company
.

As far as my personal
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skills
are concerned
, recently I have attended a public speaking course which has
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helped
me to master the way I communicate.
Moreover
, in my last
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job
I developed leader
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skills
which became a key asset of my personality.

To conclude
, I would be available for an interview at any which is suitable for you.
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Please
do not hesitate to contact me if you need
further
information.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
,

Yours
sincerely
,

Francesco
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IELTS letter why you like the job, why you are the right person for the job, your skills

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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