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Lilliput Farm we have three cottages for rent as self-catering holiday accommodation. We have been awarded 4 stars in the Holiday Accommodation Accreditation Service for excellence in quality and service. Dairymaid’s Loft is situated above the barn under the eaves. It is the

Lilliput Farm we have three cottages for rent as self-catering holiday accommodation. We have been awarded 4 stars in the Holiday Accommodation Accreditation Service for excellence in quality and service. Dairymaid’s Loft is situated above the barn under the eaves. It is the VE6qm
Dear Rajesh, Hope you are doing well, I am happy to inform you that I recently got promoted and my company transferring me to Denver in Colorado. When I hear this news, I am happy and worried at the same time as I have to move to the new location. However, I realized that you are also living in the same city, and then I took sigh of relief. Now please help me in finding a place as you already settled up there, and know the near by place well. Basically I am looking for a nice and cozy single bedroom, moreover, I finding a locality where it will take less time to reach to my office. Furthermore, I need a place where I can easily get transportation to go here and there as I don't have my personal vehicle. I will reach at your home next week then we will have some fun. First thing I want to do is to visit all the places nearby your area and then we will go to the pub at night, It's been sometime we have not partied together so I want to sit with you and do some chit-chat. Next day we have to find a accomodation for me as I explained me need earlier to you. Soon I will meet to you. Your Friend, Puneet Gupta
Dear Rajesh, Hope you are doing well, I am happy to inform you that I recently
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transferring me to Denver in Colorado. When I hear this news, I am happy and worried at the same time as I
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have to
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to the new location.
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, I realized that you are
also
living in the same city, and then I took sigh of relief.
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Now
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me in finding a
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place
as you already settled up there, and know the
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near by
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place
well.
Basically
I am looking for a nice and cozy single bedroom,
moreover
,
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I finding
a locality where it will take less time to reach to my office.
Furthermore
, I need a
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place
where I can
easily
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get
transportation to go here and there as I don't have my personal vehicle. I will reach at your home
next
week then we will have
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some
fun.

First
thing I want to do is to visit all the
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places
nearby your
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area and
then we will go to the pub at night, It's been sometime we have not partied together
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so
I want to sit with you and do
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some
chit-chat.
Next
day we
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have to
find
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a
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accomodation
for me as I
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me need earlier to you.

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meet
to you.

Your Friend,
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Puneet
Gupta
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IELTS letter Lilliput Farm we have three cottages for rent as self-catering holiday accommodation. We have been awarded 4 stars in the Holiday Accommodation Accreditation Service for excellence in quality and service. Dairymaid’s Loft is situated above the barn under the eaves. It is the

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