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Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country.•Make plans to meet them at a convenient location•Specify a time and date•Suggest some activities you may all participate in during their visit

Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country. •Make plans to meet them at a convenient location•Specify a time and date•Suggest some activities you may all participate in during their visit 2bxdo
Dear Mrs. Smith, I hope you and your lovely family are doing great. I was pleased to hear that you will be visiting my country next week and I have no doubt that you will enjoy your stay. Based on your tour arrangement, you will come to my hometown on 12th February. So if you will be free on 13th, I suggest meeting you around noon time at one of my favorite restaurants located in the city center to have lunch together with your family. I will send the location to your phone, so please tell me what time is possible for you to get there. As you know, Tehran is a big city which has lots of places worth visiting. But because of your short stay, I’ve selected some of the most enjoyable ones to visit together such as Milad Tower, Iran’s National Museum, and a mountainous region in northern Tehran. Please call me and let me know if you are interested so that we can arrange a detailed plan together. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Ensieh
Dear Mrs. Smith,

I hope you and your lovely family are doing great. I was
pleased
to hear that you will be visiting my country
next
week and I have no doubt that you will enjoy your stay.

Based on your tour arrangement, you will
come
to my hometown on 12th February.
So
if you will be free on 13th, I suggest meeting you around noon time at one of my favorite restaurants located in the city center to have lunch together with your family. I will
send
the location to your phone,
so
please
tell
me what time is possible for you to
get
there.

As you know, Tehran is a
big
city which has lots of places worth visiting.
But
because
of your short stay, I’ve selected
some
of the most enjoyable ones to visit together such as
Milad
Tower, Iran’s National Museum, and a mountainous region in northern Tehran.
Please
call me and
let
me know if you
are interested
so
that we can arrange a detailed plan together.

Looking forward to seeing you
soon
.

Best wishes,

Ensieh

IELTS letter Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country. •Make plans to meet them at a convenient location•Specify a time and date•Suggest some activities you may all participate in during their visit

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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