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You are renting a new apartment but your family situation has changed recently Write a letter to the real estate agency asking them to find a new accommodation more suitable for your needs In your letter explain your current family situation What type of

You are renting a new apartment but your family situation has changed recently Write a letter to the real estate agency asking them to find a new accommodation more suitable for your needs In your letter explain your current family situation What type of pReGd
Dear Sir, I am currently living in 43 sector two-bed room set on rent. I am writing to you to find a spacious rental accommodation, preferably three bed room set with attached washrooms. There are total 5 members in my family including me, my wife, my parents and my son. From last three years, my son was in another city to complete her post-graduation course. Recently, he got very good job in Chandigarh, so he came back. As he has grown up now, we need more space in our house. Additionally, owing to his job, our family income has increased, so we can now afford larger house. So we require 3BHK apartment with attached washrooms with each bedroom. We are looking for such accommodation near 43 sector in the range of 30 to 35 thousand monthly rent. We are planning to shift within next two months, so it would be appreciated if we could get aforementioned accommodation within this time period. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best Regards Jagdeep Kaur.
Dear Sir,

I am
currently
living in 43 sector two-bed room set on rent. I am writing to you to find a spacious rental accommodation,
preferably
three
bed room
set with attached washrooms.

There are total 5 members in my family including me, my wife, my parents and my son. From last three years, my son was in another city to complete her post-graduation course. Recently, he
got
very
good
job in Chandigarh,
so
he came back. As he has grown up
now
, we need more space in our
house
.
Additionally
, owing to his job, our family income has increased,
so
we can
now
afford larger
house
.
So
we require 3BHK apartment with attached washrooms with each bedroom. We are looking for such accommodation near 43
sector
in the range of 30 to 35 thousand monthly rent.

We are planning to shift within
next
two months,
so
it would
be appreciated
if we could
get
aforementioned accommodation within this time period.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Best Regards

Jagdeep
Kaur
.
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IELTS letter You are renting a new apartment but your family situation has changed recently Write a letter to the real estate agency asking them to find a new accommodation more suitable for your needs In your letter explain your current family situation What type of

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