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You would like do house sitting job in a new town but you want to bring your pet together with you. Write a letter to the host and ask for permission to let your pet stay in their place.

You would like do house sitting job in a new town but you want to bring your pet together with you. Write a letter to the host and ask for permission to let your pet stay in their place. RN0pM
Dear Alex, I hope this letter finds your loving family in good health. I am writing to see if I could ask a permission. Please let me to demonstrate my situation. As you know, my husband and I are going to Melbourne on 1st October. Not only in order to travel but also become your housekeeper whilst you are in Europe. Unfortunately, my poor little dog, Puffy, had a recurrent sickness and need to be under the supervision. In addition, this circumstance will turn out to be way more expensive if we let Puffy stay in veterinary clinic. Thus, we decided to bring him travel with us. I was hoping you wouldn't mind allowing Puffy, a really nice and well behaved dog, to stay together with us in your place. I will always keep an eye on her to make sure everything is going alright. Plus, your house will be kept tidy and clean perfectly all the time. Thank you kindly, Thanh Mai
Dear Alex,

I hope this letter finds your loving family in
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good
health. I am writing to
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see
if I could ask a permission.
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Please
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let
me to demonstrate my situation.

As you know, my husband and I are going to Melbourne on 1st October. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
in order to travel
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but
also
become your housekeeper whilst you are in Europe. Unfortunately, my poor
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
dog, Puffy, had a recurrent sickness and need to be under the supervision.
In addition
, this circumstance will turn out to be way more expensive if we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
Puffy stay in veterinary clinic.
Thus
, we decided to bring him travel with us.

I was hoping you wouldn't mind allowing Puffy, a
really
nice and
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well behaved
dog, to stay together with us in your place. I will always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
an eye on her to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure everything is going alright. Plus, your
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house
will be
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kept
tidy and clean
perfectly
all the time.

Thank you kindly,

Thanh Mai
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IELTS letter You would like do house sitting job in a new town but you want to bring your pet together with you. Write a letter to the host and ask for permission to let your pet stay in their place.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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