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Write a letter to your friend to inform him/her that one of your relative is traveling to his/her country and say -Describe your relative, why is he traveling? Why do you think they should meet?

Write a letter to your friend to inform him/her that one of your relative is traveling to his/her country and say -Describe your relative, why is he traveling? Why do you think they should meet? QLKNx
Hi Aman, Hope my letter finds you in good health and spirit. I am well too. I am writing you to seek a help from you regarding the visit of my cousin to your country. I hope you remember my cousin, Navpreet, who also visited our hostel few times and met you as well. you would be happy to hear that she has decided to pursue her higher education from UTS university of Sydney, Australia. She is supposed to fly in coming month as her classes will be started at the end of next month. As she will be new to this area and you have already settled there, I think you can guide her in the initial days of her stay. Additionally, you had also done your post-graduation from the same university, therefore, you can tell her about the culture of institute so that she can prepare her well in advance. I would really appreciate if you do this favor for me and met her once in her beginning days. I have already shared your contact details with her and she would contact you once she will reach there. A lot of love. Your loving, XYZ.
Hi
Aman
,

Hope my letter finds you in
good
health and spirit. I am well too. I am writing you to seek a
help
from you regarding the visit of my cousin to your country.

I
hope you remember my cousin,
Navpreet
, who
also
visited our hostel few times and met you
as well
.
you
would be happy to hear that she has decided to pursue her higher education from
UTS
university of Sydney, Australia. She
is supposed
to
fly
in coming month as her classes will be
started
at the
end
of
next
month. As she will be new to this area and you have already settled there, I
think
you can guide her in the initial days of her stay.
Additionally
, you had
also
done your post-graduation from the same university,
therefore
, you can
tell
her about the culture of institute
so
that she can prepare her well in advance.

I would
really
appreciate if you do this favor for me and met her once in her beginning days. I have already shared your contact
details
with
her and
she would contact you once she will reach there.

A lot of
love
.

Your loving,

XYZ.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to inform him/her that one of your relative is traveling to his/her country and say -Describe your relative, why is he traveling? Why do you think they should meet?

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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