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Your former boss has contacted you to offer you a position to help him start his new company. Write a letter to your former boss. In your letter: • Thank him for the job offering • Decline his job offer and explain why. • Show your appreciation and wish him well on his new project.

Your former boss has contacted you to offer you a position to help him start his new company. Write a letter to your former boss. In your letter: • Thank him for the job offering • Decline his job offer and explain why. • Show your appreciation and wish him well on his new project. GWaLB

I am writing this letter with reference to the job oppotunity offered by you in your new company as a system engineer. First of all, I am very thankful to you for considering me for this post. It is overwhelming that I posses the qualities which you are looking to start your brand new firm. However I am not in a position to make any decision right now. Therefore, I cannot accept the job offer due to my personal reasons. My wife and I have worked hard to settle here and buying a new house at new province will costs us an arm and a leg. I do not want to abandon my family for my dream job. Nevertheless, your job proposal is astonishing and I believe I can keep up the position here one day. I wish you a good luck with your new possibilities and challenges. Again, my heartfelt apologies for turning down your job offer. Hope you understand. Yours faithfully, MD Rafeeq.

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job
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oppotunity
 offered by you in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
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company
 as a system engineer.

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First of all
, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 thankful to you for considering me for this post. It is overwhelming that Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'I'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
I posses
 the qualities which you are looking to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
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new
 firm. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 I am not in a position to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 any decision right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

Therefore
, I cannot accept the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 offer due to my personal reasons. My wife and I have worked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to settle here and buying a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 province will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "cost"cost
costs
 us an arm and a leg. I do not want to abandon my family for my dream job.

Nevertheless
, your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 proposal is astonishing and I believe I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 up the position here one day. I wish you a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 luck with your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 possibilities and challenges. Again, my heartfelt apologies for turning down your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 offer. Hope you understand.

Yours faithfully
,

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Rafeeq
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