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Letter to a friend regarding a camping trip

Letter to a friend regarding a camping trip PXBej
Dear Natasha, I was really pleased to hear from you the other day. I am doing very well. Hope you are too. I was glad when you asked for my help regarding your camping trip. Basically, I reckon it is the best decision you have ever made. Camping is an amazing experience one should have at least once in the lifetime. I am sure you would enjoy the independence, being a part of the nature, and of course the adventurous feel to it. However, you should also be aware that there could be harmful wild creatures such as serpents that you need to protect yourself from. Additionally, as you are away from the basic facilities, you should go fully prepared, so that you wouldn’t have to face any difficulty throughout the stay. In any case, if you are thinking you might feel alone, I would love to join you as I haven’t planned anything for my summer vacation yet. I bet my experience in camping would come in handy as you are a first timer to the whole thing. Please write me back if you need any further guidance on what to bring with you and so on. Yours sincerely, Thamasha
Dear Natasha,

I was
really
pleased
to hear from you the other day. I am doing
very
well. Hope you are too. I was glad when you
asked for
my
help
regarding your camping trip.
Basically
, I reckon it is the best decision you have ever made. Camping is an amazing experience one should have at least once in the lifetime. I am sure you would enjoy the independence, being a part of the nature, and
of course
the adventurous feel to it.

However
, you should
also
be aware that there could be harmful wild creatures such as serpents that you need to protect yourself from.
Additionally
, as you are away from the basic facilities, you should go
fully
prepared,
so
that you wouldn’t
have to
face any difficulty throughout the stay.

In any case, if you are thinking you might feel alone, I would
love
to
join
you as I haven’t planned anything for my summer vacation
yet
. I bet my experience in camping would
come
in handy as you are a
first
timer to the whole thing.
Please
write me back if you need any
further
guidance on what to bring with you and
so
on.

Yours
sincerely
,

Thamasha
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend regarding a camping trip

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
200 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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