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Motivation letter, statement of purpose

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Economy and Business professionals in the modern age play an important role in shaping the global economy and the future direction it will take. As I completed my Bachelor Business Administration in (Marketing and Finance), it is clear that pursuing a master’s degree in International Economy and Business would be the wisest choice. The prospect of working in this industry on an international scale excites me greatly, and to achieve this goal I am applying to two years Master’s programme in International Economy and Business at Széchenyi István University, Kautz Gyula Faculty of Economics. Studying in Hungry for higher education was a dream for me for years; this is mainly because Hungry has a top education system having one of the highest literacy rate. Another reason which is very important for me for choosing Hungry as my destination for masters is that the universities and the industry in Sweden have very close ties, which educates the students according to the latest and most efficient methods from the industry. Students can come into contact with the leading entrepreneurs, and mentors. This interaction would increase their knowledge ten-folds. Széchenyi István University is a top class university in the world, and has an overall score of 4. 1 stars, according to student reviews on Studyportals, the best place to find out how students rate their study and living experience at universities from all over the world. Széchenyi István University is leading the world in both training and research in the region. Here, I will have the opportunity to shape my future.
Economy
and
Business
professionals in the modern age play an
important
role in shaping the global
economy
and the future direction it will take. As I completed my Bachelor
Business
Administration in (Marketing and Finance), it is
clear
that pursuing a master’s degree in International
Economy
and
Business
would be the wisest choice. The prospect of working in this industry on an international scale excites me
greatly
, and to achieve this goal I am applying to two years Master’s
programme
in International
Economy
and
Business
at
Széchenyi
István
University
,
Kautz
Gyula
Faculty of Economics.

Studying in Hungry for higher education was a dream for me for years; this is
mainly
because
Hungry has a top education system having one of the highest literacy rate. Another reason which is
very
important
for me for choosing Hungry as my destination for masters is that the
universities
and the industry in Sweden have
very
close ties, which educates the
students
according to the latest and most efficient methods from the industry.
Students
can
come
into contact with the leading entrepreneurs, and mentors. This interaction would increase their knowledge ten-folds.
Széchenyi
István
University
is a top
class
university
in the world, and has an
overall
score of 4. 1 stars, according to
student
reviews on
Studyportals
, the best place to find out how
students
rate their study and living experience at
universities
from all over the world.
Széchenyi
István
University
is leading the world in both training and research in the region. Here, I will have the opportunity to shape my future.
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IELTS letter Motivation letter, statement of purpose

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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