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Letter for a memory course

Letter for a memory course 2PExJ
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Zeynep Aslan, I am a material scientist and engineer. Currently, I am working as a graduate intern at Technical University of Ostrava. I would like to attend the memory course which is provided by you. Undoubtedly, remembering facts and shapes has significant role for a student on my position. Therefore, I need to solve this issue for my career. Unfortunately, I have been struggling on mostly remembering charts since my adolescence. To overcome this, I would like you to inform me about your way to help improving your clients memory during this course. The reason of asking this, I strongly believe that each person has their learning style. Furthermore, I appreciate if you can share the information that when it is going to start and how much I should pay for classes. In addition, I prefer to pay weekly. Sincerely yours, Zeynep Aslan.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
Zeynep
Aslan
, I am a material scientist and engineer.
Currently
, I am working as a graduate intern at Technical University of
Ostrava
.

I would like to attend the memory course which
is provided
by you.
Undoubtedly
, remembering facts and shapes has significant role for a student on my position.
Therefore
, I need to solve this issue for my career. Unfortunately, I have been struggling on
mostly
remembering charts since my adolescence.

To overcome this, I would like you to inform me about your way to
help
improving
your clients memory during this course. The reason of asking this, I
strongly
believe that each person has their learning style.
Furthermore
, I appreciate if you can share the information that when it is going to
start
and how much I should pay for classes.
In addition
, I prefer to pay weekly.

Sincerely
yours,

Zeynep
Aslan
.
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IELTS letter Letter for a memory course

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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