Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Zeynep Aslan, I am a material scientist and engineer. Currently, I am working as a graduate intern at Technical University of Ostrava.
I would like to attend the memory course which is provided by you. Undoubtedly, remembering facts and shapes has significant role for a student on my position. Therefore, I need to solve this issue for my career. Unfortunately, I have been struggling on mostly remembering charts since my adolescence.
To overcome this, I would like you to inform me about your way to help improving your clients memory during this course. The reason of asking this, I strongly believe that each person has their learning style. Furthermore, I appreciate if you can share the information that when it is going to start and how much I should pay for classes. In addition, I prefer to pay weekly.
Sincerely yours,
Zeynep Aslan. 
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is  
Zeynep
  Aslan
, I am a material scientist and engineer.  
Currently
, I am working as a graduate intern at Technical University of  
Ostrava
.
I would like to attend the memory course which  
is provided
 by you.  
Undoubtedly
, remembering facts and shapes has significant role for a student on my position.  
Therefore
, I need to solve this issue for my career. Unfortunately, I have been struggling on  
mostly
 remembering charts since my adolescence.
To overcome this, I would like you to inform me about your way to  
help
  improving
 your clients memory during this course. The reason of asking this, I  
strongly
 believe that each person has their learning style.  
Furthermore
, I appreciate if you can share the information that when it is going to  
start
 and how much I should pay for classes.  
In addition
, I prefer to pay weekly. 
Sincerely
 yours, 
Zeynep
  Aslan
.