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Write a letter to someone influential explaining why and how they should take action on the climate crisis

Write a letter to someone influential explaining why and how they should take action on the climate crisis KYEDR
Hi sir, I hope you're doing good. I'm writing to make a request of you. As far as I know, the climatic crisis such as global warming, green house effect has adverse impacts on the Earth in mordern society. Some recent studies show that the primary cause of this problem is the human's action on the environment. It is essential that we take urgent efforts with a view to reducing the climate crisis's impact to maintain a healthy environment for the whole of Earth's inhabitants. Thus, we should reduce the greenhouse gas emissions from industries and households, plant more trees, use own bags instead of plastic bags, recycle things from plastic such as bottles, cans, . . . , save electric and wate, . . . etc. I genuinely hope that you will consider taking action on this matter to preserve and protect our precious planet for our future generations as well as yourself and the rest of the community.
Hi sir, I hope you're doing
good
. I'm writing to
make
a request of you. As far as I know, the climatic crisis such as global warming, green
house
effect has adverse impacts on the Earth in
mordern
society.
Some
recent studies
show
that the primary cause of this problem is the human's action on the environment. It is essential that we take urgent efforts with a view to reducing the climate crisis's impact to maintain a healthy environment for the whole of Earth's inhabitants.
Thus
, we should
reduce
the greenhouse gas emissions from industries and households, plant more trees,
use
own
bags
instead
of plastic bags, recycle things from plastic such as bottles, cans
, .
.
.
,
save electric and
wate
, .
.
.
etc
. I
genuinely
hope that you will consider taking action on this matter to preserve and protect our precious planet for our future generations
as well
as yourself and the rest of the community.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to someone influential explaining why and how they should take action on the climate crisis

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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