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Your employer wants you to attend a training course in computer skill next month but for personal reasons you are not able to do this.

dear sir Walter I'm John. I hope you're doing great. I'm write letter for you about attend this training course for improved computer skill at the next month. I know this craft is very important in workplace and also very useful for us. About this issue I have little problem. As you know in the next month I will get married and I have to ready for that. in hance, I'm very busy at that time. even I want from you, if possible in the next month get to leave work for one week. I have two suggest for you first of all we can attend in training course during this month. another offer we can attend in training courses after my ceremony. I promise in the near future we can develop in company. I hope accepted my apologize about this issue. thank you. your sincerely John

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Dear
dear
 sir Walter I'm John. I hope you're doing great. I'm Consider using either the past participle “written” or the present participle “writing” here.writtenwriting
write
 letter for you about attend this training course for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 computer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 at the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 know this craft is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 in workplace and also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful for us. About this issue I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 problem. As you know in the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).married, and
married and
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 ready for that. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.In
in
Possible spelling mistake found.dancehencechanceChanceLancelance
hance
, I'm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy at that time. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Even
even
 I want from you, if possible in the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 work for one week. I have The expression ‘two suggest’ seems incorrect in this context.to suggest
two suggest
 for you Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.first
first of all
 we can attend in training course during this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Another
another
 offer we can attend in training courses after my ceremony. I promise in the near future we can develop in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I hope This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 my The word “apologize” is a noun. Did you mean “apology”?apology
apologize
 about this issue. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Thank
thank
 you. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Your
your
sincerely
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.John.John!John?John:John,John;
John