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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to a forgotten g

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to a forgotten g Jwa15
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to a forgotten garment that I left in the cinema yesterday, 2 November. It is a leather dark blue jacket, having a zip front and white sequins, forming a flower on its back, so the item is quite distinctive. I left the jacket after watching the last session of the Avengers movie, which finished at 10 pm. Unfortunately, I can not say my seat's number, however, I clearly remember that it was hall 6, and I was sitting in the middle of the seventh or eighth row. I would be very grateful if you could look for the thing that probably can be on the floor near the seat. If you find it, please, answer the email or give me a phone call at +77471541129 at your earliest convenience, and I will come to the cinema immediately. I hope for your understanding and assistance. Yours faithfully, Tatyana Bikmeyeva.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to a forgotten garment that I
left
in the cinema yesterday, 2 November. It is a leather dark blue jacket, having a zip front and white sequins, forming a flower on its back,
so
the item is quite distinctive.

I
left
the jacket after watching the last session of
the Avengers
movie, which finished at 10 pm. Unfortunately, I can not say my seat's number,
however
, I
clearly
remember that it was hall 6, and I was sitting in the middle of the seventh or eighth row.

I would be
very
grateful if you could look for the thing that
probably
can be on the floor near the seat. If you find it,
please
, answer the email or give me a phone call at +77471541129 at your earliest convenience, and I will
come
to the cinema immediately.

I hope for your understanding and assistance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tatyana
Bikmeyeva
.
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to a forgotten g

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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