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describe your sport you like watching

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Hi, my name is Ta Thu Giang. I will describe the sport I like watching. It is a kind of sport named football. I used to play soccer when I was a kid but now I prefer watching to playing. I always watch it with my parents in the evening. It is an interesting and individual team sport. Football is considered the king of sports. A game played between two teams of eleven people. Each team tries to kick, run with, or throw the ball across the opposing team's goal to score points. The team with maximum goals is called the winner team so the one with fewer goals becomes the loser. A game needs a referee with a red card and a yellow card if someone makes mistake. The official match will have 90 minutes of play and is divided into 2 halves of foul. Each half has 45 minutes and 15 minutes break. I like watching it because football is highly team spirit, it makes me feel excited and improve my knowledge.
Hi, my name is Ta Thu
Giang
. I will
describe
the
sport
I like watching. It is a kind of
sport
named football. I
used
to play soccer when I was a kid
but
now
I prefer watching to playing. I always
watch
it with my parents in the evening. It is an interesting and individual
team
sport
. Football
is considered
the king of
sports
. A game played between two
teams
of eleven
people
. Each
team
tries to kick, run with, or throw the ball across the opposing team's goal to score points. The
team
with maximum goals
is called
the winner
team
so
the one with fewer goals becomes the loser. A game needs a referee with a red card and a yellow card if someone
makes
mistake. The official match will have 90 minutes of play and
is divided
into 2 halves of foul. Each half has 45 minutes and 15 minutes break. I like watching it
because
football is
highly
team
spirit, it
makes
me feel excited and
improve
my knowledge.
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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