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write a letter to your friend who is planning to go for a summary vacation. In your letter include what will be the most entertaining part, what are the possible disadvantages and say him whether you could join?

write a letter to your friend who is planning to go for a summary vacation. In your letter include what will be the most entertaining part, what are the possible disadvantages and say him whether you could join? RRABG
Dear Sudan, I hope this letter finds you in good health. It's been a long time since we met earlier and I hope you are doing well. I am happy to hear that you are planning for your first-ever camping in the coming Summer. You'll love the natural beauty. The Panoramic views and breathtaking beauty from the top of the camping site are amazing. Also, you will the natural habitat in its pristine form. Everything is fresh such as air, water, and there will be nothing to disturb the tranquility of the surrounding. However, you should be aware of wild moths. They might cause allergies and skin rashes sometimes, so don't forget to take body lotion. Also, the area doesn't have electricity access so don't forget to put a power bank in your backpack. Unfortunately, I'll not be able to join this time because there will be university exams at the same time. We'll plan it next year again as I will have a month-long vacation during next year Summer. Enjoy your summer vacation. Regards, Rajkumar
Dear Sudan, I hope this letter finds you in
good
health. It's been a long time since we met earlier and I hope you are doing well. I am happy to hear that you are planning for your
first
-ever camping in the coming Summer. You'll
love
the natural beauty. The Panoramic views and breathtaking beauty from the top of the camping site are amazing.
Also
, you will the natural habitat in its pristine form. Everything is fresh such as air, water, and there will be nothing to disturb the tranquility of the surrounding.

However
, you should be aware of wild moths. They might cause allergies and skin rashes
sometimes
,
so
don't forget to take body lotion.
Also
, the area doesn't have electricity access
so
don't forget to put a power bank in your backpack.

Unfortunately, I'll not be able to
join
this time
because
there will be university exams at the same time. We'll plan it
next
year again as I will have a month-long vacation during
next
year Summer. Enjoy your summer vacation.

Regards, Rajkumar
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend who is planning to go for a summary vacation. In your letter include what will be the most entertaining part, what are the possible disadvantages and say him whether you could join?

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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