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write a letter to branch manager to open a demat account.

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1BC FLAT 6Raibarely Uttarpradesh 22nd Dec 2021 The Bank Manager State Bank Of IndiaUttarpradesh Sub: For opening Demat account. Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter to open a Demat account. For 5years, I am an honourable account holder in your esteemed bank- State Bank of India at Bahadurpur Branch, Patna. Let me inform you that I have signed an agreement with TATA Group, there is a need for a Demat account to trade the share. Let me inform what the procedures I do and which document is required to begin this. Apart from, may that open without my presence or it can be done on behalf of mine. I am looking forward to receiving at your convenience response. yours sincerely Edna.
1BC FLAT
6Raibarely
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Uttarpradesh


22nd Dec 2021

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IndiaUttarpradesh


Sub: For opening
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Demat
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account
. For 5years, I am an
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honourable
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holder in your esteemed
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State
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Bank
of India at
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Bahadurpur
Branch, Patna.
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Let
me inform you that I have signed an agreement with TATA Group, there is a need for a
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Demat
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account
to trade the share.
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me inform what the procedures I do and which document
is required
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begin
this. Apart from, may that open without my presence or it can
be done
on behalf of mine. I am looking forward to receiving at your convenience response.
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yours
sincerely
Edna.
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IELTS letter write a letter to branch manager to open a demat account.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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