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Your colleague has invited you yo his farewelkparty .you will not be able to attend the party write ...

Your colleague has invited you yo his farewelkparty. you will not be able to attend the party write. . . BaREX
Hello! how are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I'm writing this letter to you because I heard about your retirement. It is mixed emotion of excitement because I cannot come to your party. You know about my cousin simar, she has marriage on the same day. it is a family affair and I cannot be absent from there. I'm an active participant in this marriage. I can postpone all my meetings and work but I don't miss it. Anyways, I am very happy for you. We have been spent the last three years together. As a senior, you taught me leadership qualities and communications skills as well as I have learned how to prepare meticulously plan for work. I shall be in contact by mobile phone and Email. My email is simar0987@gmail. Do you let me you if you will change your contact? I hope we will meet in the near future. With love ANNA
Hello!
how
are you? I hope this
letter


finds

you
in pink of your health. I'm writing this letter to
you


because


I

heard

about
your retirement. It

is mixed


emotion of

excitement

because


I cannot

come


to
your party. You know about my cousin
simar
, she has marriage on the same day.
it
is


a family

affair and I cannot

be absent

from

there
. I'm an active participant in this marriage. I can postpone all my meetings and
work


but


I

don't

miss

it
. Anyways, I

am
very


happy
for you. We have
been


spent

the last

three
years together. As a senior, you taught me leadership qualities and
communications


skills


as well


as I have

learned

how to prepare

meticulously


plan
for work. I shall be in contact by mobile phone and Email. My email is simar0987@gmail. Do
you


let


me you if you will

change


your

contact
?

I hope we will

meet


in
the near future. With

love


ANNA
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IELTS letter Your colleague has invited you yo his farewelkparty. you will not be able to attend the party write. . .

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  American English
46 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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