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You bought a jar of peanut.you are not pleased with it about the quality of the product and behaviour of the staff.

You bought a jar of peanut. you are not pleased with it about the quality of the product and behaviour of the staff. EqqjD
I am afraid to say I have number of complaints about jar of peanut. I recently purchased jar of peanut from my local supermarket, expecting the same great taste I have always enjoyed. However peanut butter turned out to be grainy and rancid not at all like the smooth and slightly sweet product that I am used to. I called the customer service section to alert them to the problem and spoke with a representative named Karan. I asked if I could speak to a supervisor, only to be told again that there was nothing the company could do. Karan disconnected the phone before I could say anything else. I am disappointed that company would provide such substandard customer service. Enclosed please find a copy of the receipt with proof of purchase. I would appreciate a refund or replacement product and hope that you will deal with this lapse in the customer services section accordingly. Your faithfully. Zarina Zaynidinova
I am afraid to say I have number of complaints about jar of peanut. I recently
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purchased
jar of peanut from my local supermarket, expecting the same great taste I have always enjoyed.
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However
peanut butter turned out to be grainy and rancid not at all like the smooth and
slightly
sweet product that I am
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used
to. I called the customer service section to alert them to the problem and spoke with a representative named
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Karan
. I asked if I could speak to a supervisor,
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only
to be
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told
again that there was nothing the
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company
could do.
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Karan
disconnected the phone
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before
I could say anything else. I
am disappointed
that
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company
would provide such substandard customer service. Enclosed
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please
find a copy of the receipt with proof of
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purchase
. I would appreciate a refund or replacement product and hope that you will deal with this lapse in the customer services section
accordingly
. Your
faithfully
.
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Zarina
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Zaynidinova

IELTS letter You bought a jar of peanut. you are not pleased with it about the quality of the product and behaviour of the staff.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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