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You ordered a new check book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the check book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

You ordered a new check book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the check book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter. KB3k
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this to inform you that it has been two weeks since I ordered a new check book in your bank, but, unfortunately until now I did not receive anything. On 11th of November I called to the bank and ordered one bundled of check book and ask when I could possibly receive the item, The teller response says it only takes a week to be process. So, I presume, I can have it within a week. I am quite disappointed on the service. Anyhow, May I ask the exact date and time of the check book I really need that on my trip next month. However, I have been your client for over five years and this is my first time to encounter the slow process of your service. It is exceptional that you will take a course of action on this matter, so that your customer would be still on your bank. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Aubrey
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this to inform you that it has been two weeks since I ordered a new
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check
book in your bank,
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but
, unfortunately until
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now
I did not receive anything.

On 11th of November I called to the bank and ordered one bundled of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
book and ask when I could
possibly
receive the item, The teller response says it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
takes a week to be process.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I presume, I can have it within a week. I am quite disappointed on the service. Anyhow, May I ask the exact date and time of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
book I
really
need that on my trip
next
month.

However
, I have been your client for over five years and this is my
first
time to encounter the slow process of your service. It is exceptional that you will take a course of action on this matter,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that your customer would be
still
on your bank.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
, Aubrey
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IELTS letter You ordered a new check book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the check book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

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  American English
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170 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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