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Your brother has recently won a debate competition in his college. Write a letter to him and in your letter: • Congratulate him for the achievement • Explain how you feel about this achievement • Invite him to come visit you for his holidays

Dear Akash, Hope you’re in the pink of health and the best of spirits. I just came to know that you have won the debate competition and I’m writing to congratulate you for the feat. I got a call from our parents and they told me about this success of yours. I cannot put it in words how happy I am to see you perform so well in all areas of your study, and to see you continue the streak of success makes me feel proud of you. I knew that you’ll win the competition because you were working very hard for that, and it filled my heart with pride and joy after listening to the good news. Next month you have your summer holidays, and I want you to visit me so that we can spend some time together as it has been long since we last met. I have also called our parents to make sure that we all can celebrate your achievement. My best wishes for your future and hope to see you soon. Yours loving brother, Varinder

Dear Akash,

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just
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to know that you have won the debate competition and I’m writing

to congratulate you for the feat.

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got
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told
 me about this success of

yours. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 cannot put it in words how happy I am to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you perform

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so
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see
 you continue the streak

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makes
 me feel proud of you. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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because
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very
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hard
 for that, and it

filled my heart with pride and joy after listening to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news.

Next
 month you have your summer holidays, and I want you to visit

me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time together as it has been long

since we last met. I have also
 called our parents to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure that

we all can celebrate your achievement.

My best wishes for your future and hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours loving brother,

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