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Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to request you to grant me a leave for a week during the ongoing PGP course. My name is M Kim and I am enrolled in the full-time course in business management at the Institute for the session 2019-2020. With a desire to gain a better understanding of finance subjects I had enrolled for the actuaries certifications exam six months back which has been scheduled from 27th Feb to 03rd of March at Delhi. I have been preparing for this exam for the last three months. This certification will help me portray my expertise in the subject during the annual job fair which has been scheduled for April. Therefore, considering the importance of the examination and my sincere desire to appear, I request you to grant me a leave of one week from 26th of Feb to 04th of March. During the leave, I will be completing and submitting all the required assignments through email. I hope you will look at my request favorably. Yours faithfully, Kasim
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to request you to grant me a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for a week during the ongoing PGP course. My name is M
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Kim and
I
am enrolled
in the full-time course in business management at the Institute for the session 2019-2020.

With a desire to gain a better understanding of finance subjects I had enrolled for the actuaries certifications exam six months back which has
been scheduled
from 27th Feb to 03rd of March at Delhi. I have been preparing for this exam for the last three months. This certification will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me portray my expertise in the subject during the annual job
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
which has
been scheduled
for April.

Therefore
, considering the importance of the examination and my sincere desire to appear, I request you to grant me a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
of one week from 26th of Feb to 04th of March. During the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
, I will be completing and submitting all the required assignments through email.

I hope you will look at my request
favorably
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Kasim
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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