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I am writing to ask whether you are available to help my son with some after-school Spanish lessons.

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to ask whether you are available to help my son with some after-school Spanish lessons. My son Peter, a student of 5thA, is facing some issues in pronunciation and sentence formation. Although his a bright student, his absence from the school for 30 days owing to the leg injury has lagged him behind. Therefore, your assistance is required to make him overcome the mentioned problems. Moreover, if you do not mind, I am interested to know about your teaching experience and the teaching strategies to deal with problems in language learning. It would enable me assist my son while revising his lessons at home. Kindly let me know about the schedule which you feel is the most convenient for you to provide remedial class. I am free on Saturdays and Sundays to drop him at any time. It would be great, if it is possible for you on these two days. I hope to hear from you soon, and that you will be able to help. Yours sincerely, Julie Seth
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to ask whether you are available to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
my son with
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some
after-school Spanish lessons.

My son Peter, a student of 5thA, is facing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
issues in pronunciation and sentence formation. Although his a bright student, his absence from the school for 30 days owing to the leg injury has lagged him behind.
Therefore
, your assistance
is required
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
him overcome the mentioned problems.

Moreover
, if you do not mind, I
am interested
to know about your teaching experience and the teaching strategies to deal with problems in language learning. It would enable me assist my son while revising his lessons at home.

Kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know about the schedule which you feel is the most convenient for you to provide remedial
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
. I am free on Saturdays and Sundays to drop him at any time. It would be great, if it is possible for you on these two days.

I hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
, and that you will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Julie Seth
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IELTS letter I am writing to ask whether you are available to help my son with some after-school Spanish lessons.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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