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Dear Madam, Perhaps in the abroad has a lots of managing position for people who has ability to manage. Mely name is Alina Grenger. I am Uzbek, currenty working in a hotel with 3 stars as manager. It is my intention to work in overseas for three year. I am writing to you about possiblity of managing in abroad for the coming year. I have been graduated university and I have IELTS 8. 5 and CEFR C2 sertificates also I am really self confident and get on well with poeple not only these I have got skills to manage people and during the reading I am going to study Masters degree and in mear future I will work in a hotel which has 5 stars. I would certainly be interestee in hearing from you and wish to have an appointment for an meeting. For your convinience I enclose my resume. I look forward to hearing from you and wish you a happy Eid. Regards, Alina Grener

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