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You would like to work overseas,write a letter to an employment agency. What job you would like to apply. what companies are you looking for. why do you to work overseas

You would like to work overseas, write a letter to an employment agency. What job you would like to apply. what companies are you looking for. why do you to work overseas GMlYL
Dear Sir, I am writing with reference to the international jobs advertised on your agency website on 26 April 2020. My credentials matched the advertised job of pharmacist assistant and I want to apply for it. I am closed my CV for this jobI want to apply for pharmacist assistant. I have a 3 year experience in this field. I have a master degree in business administration. I want to work for multinational company because of my vast knowledge and experience in that field. In addition, I did training in supply chain management which will be beneficial in this line of work. There are plethora reasons why I will be delighted to work overseas. Firstly, salary system, bonus and promotion. Secondly get pensions and free health insurance. Lastly my family settled in New Zealand it is good to relocate and be with them. I am forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfullyRaj khushi
Dear Sir, I am writing with reference to the international jobs advertised on your agency website on 26 April 2020. My credentials matched the advertised job of pharmacist assistant and I want to apply for it. I
am closed
my CV for this
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want to apply for pharmacist assistant. I have a
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3 year
experience in this field.
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I
have a master degree in business administration.
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want to work for multinational
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of my vast knowledge and experience in that field.
In addition
, I did training in supply chain management which will be beneficial in this line of work. There are plethora reasons why I will
be delighted
to work overseas.
Firstly
, salary system, bonus and promotion.
Secondly
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get
pensions and free health insurance.
Lastly
my family settled in New Zealand it is
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good
to relocate and be with them. I am forward to hearing from you. Yours
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faithfullyRaj
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khushi
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IELTS letter You would like to work overseas, write a letter to an employment agency. What job you would like to apply. what companies are you looking for. why do you to work overseas

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5.5
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