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Your are currently taking an evening course at a local college, but not happy with the course

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Dear Sir, I am student of evening batch for Basic Computer course at your college. I am writing to express my dissatification due to some reasons. As suggested by the name, this course is intended for the students who want to enhance their skills in initial computer methods. Certainly, the method of teaching is appropriate and satisfactory; however, the administration of college does not seem to be efficient. As the exceeded numbers of admissions enduring with the lack of sitting arrangements and computers availability. Thus, all felt congested in yesterday class. In suggestion, it would probably be the more interesting to everyone to learn or have an access of own unique system. I hope you would resolve the complications on priority. Yours sincerely,

Dear Sir,

I am student of evening batch for Basic Computer course at your college. I am writing to express my Possible spelling mistake found.disqualificationdissatisfactiondesertification
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some
 reasons.

As suggested by the name, this course is intended
 for the students who want to enhance their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 in initial computer methods. Certainly
, the method of teaching is appropriate and satisfactory; however
, the administration of college does not seem to be efficient. As the exceeded numbers of admissions enduring with the lack of sitting arrangements and computers availability. Thus
, all felt congested in yesterday This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
.

In suggestion, it would probably
 be the more interesting to everyone to learn or have Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "access".access
an access
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 unique system.

I hope you would resolve the complications on priority.

Yours sincerely
, 

IELTS letter Your are currently taking an evening course at a local college, but not happy with the course

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

123 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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