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Your are currently taking an evening course at a local college, but not happy with the course

Your are currently taking an evening course at a local college, but not happy with the course PVWoX
Dear Sir, I am student of evening batch for Basic Computer course at your college. I am writing to express my dissatification due to some reasons. As suggested by the name, this course is intended for the students who want to enhance their skills in initial computer methods. Certainly, the method of teaching is appropriate and satisfactory; however, the administration of college does not seem to be efficient. As the exceeded numbers of admissions enduring with the lack of sitting arrangements and computers availability. Thus, all felt congested in yesterday class. In suggestion, it would probably be the more interesting to everyone to learn or have an access of own unique system. I hope you would resolve the complications on priority. Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir,

I am student of evening batch for Basic Computer course at your college. I am writing to express my
dissatification
due to
some
reasons.

As suggested by the name, this course
is intended
for the students who want to enhance their
skills
in initial computer methods.
Certainly
, the method of teaching is appropriate and satisfactory;
however
, the administration of college does not seem to be efficient. As the exceeded numbers of admissions enduring with the lack of sitting arrangements and computers availability.
Thus
, all felt congested in yesterday
class
.

In suggestion, it would
probably
be the more interesting to everyone to learn or have
an access
of
own
unique system.

I hope you would resolve the complications on priority.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Your are currently taking an evening course at a local college, but not happy with the course

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6 paragraphs
123 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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