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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job bYDkW
Dear John, I hope you're doing well and staying safe. I have read your letter last week, for searching a job in my country. It's time for a great news for you. I have read an advertisement in one of the local newspaper about the job opening of Purchase Specialist which I feel that, it will suit your requirement. In a result, I am writing this letter to you. In addition, job involves with sort of supply chain management, purchasing activity, day-to-day procurement and required a basic knowledge of engineering products which you have obviously, I believe. Hence, based on above criteria, I assume that, this position definitaly fit as per your acadamic study and field of interest. Furthermore, you can apply job as per my email which have full details of given job description, profile, skills and applying procedure. Thus, Please go through the email as earliest in order to your application. I'll be expecting your reply after applying the job. Yours, Robert
Dear John,

I hope you're doing well and staying safe. I have read your letter last week, for searching a
job
in my country.

It's time for
a great news
for you. I have read an advertisement in one of the local newspaper about the
job
opening of
Purchase
Specialist which I feel that, it will suit your requirement. In a result, I am writing this letter to you.

In addition
,
job
involves with sort of supply chain management, purchasing activity, day-to-day procurement and required a basic knowledge of engineering products which you have
obviously
, I believe.

Hence
, based on above criteria, I assume that, this position
definitaly
fit as per your
acadamic
study and field of interest.
Furthermore
, you can apply
job
as per my email which have full
details
of
given
job
description, profile,
skills
and applying procedure.

Thus
,
Please
go through the email as earliest in order to your application. I'll be expecting your reply after applying the job.

Yours,

Robert
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IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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