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letter to accommodation office

letter to accommodation office KwGKL
Dear Sir, I am writing to request you to arrange another accommodation of one room. I am living with Peter Sanghai in Room no 402. Our Room size is 50 Sq Ft. it is small room with 20 sq ft kitchen and one washroom. This room is very small. It does not have any storage room hence, after keeping our household items, We did not have enough space to move. Kitchen slab is also short. At a time, it is not possible for both of us to stand in kitchen. Wooden gate of bathroom is wrecked and lock is also not working. Tap is also broken. I request you to arrange another accommodation with average size of Room, kitchen and one small store room also, ensure the condition of bathroom gate and lock is good. It will be better if size of kitchen is large so that we can cook food comfortably. Your earliest action will help us to resolve our problems.
Dear Sir,

I am writing to request you to arrange another accommodation of one
room
. I am living with Peter
Sanghai
in
Room
no 402. Our
Room
size is 50 Sq Ft. it is
small
room
with
20 sq ft
kitchen
and one washroom.

This
room
is
very
small
. It does not have any storage
room
hence
, after keeping our household items, We did not have
enough
space to
move
.
Kitchen
slab is
also
short. At a time, it is not possible for both of us to stand in
kitchen
. Wooden gate of bathroom
is wrecked
and lock is
also
not working. Tap is
also
broken.

I request you to arrange another accommodation with average size of
Room
,
kitchen
and one
small
store
room
also
, ensure the condition of bathroom gate and lock is
good
. It will be better if size of
kitchen
is large
so
that we can cook food
comfortably
.

Your earliest action will
help
us to resolve our problems.
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IELTS letter letter to accommodation office

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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