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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy E3Nax
Dear sugantha, How are you? Hope your work going well. I am writing this letter to let you to share my delightful experience about carpet flower show is going on grand palace, center of Brussels city. Started from March 27th, Which I have went along with my roommates. This show is planned for 5 days. Buddy, Let me brief about this event. Event will be held every 2 years once. Flowers are decorated in form of carpet and the president of Brussels will come to visit. The carpet of 77m x24 m is composed by about 120 volunteers. Every year they had a theme and this year the event is made up of 600, 000 variety of flowers and the theme as African lye. Since our college days, you have a great inclination on gardening and towards nature. I swear you will enjoy and admire this visit. Also you will get some innovated ideas and information to enhance your art and craft using this various species. My dear friend I have plan to re visit during this weekend. It would be really great if you will join with me. Please hurry up bit in decision and share the details at what time you will be reaching Brussels so that I can pick you and enjoy the event together. Awaiting for your replay. Yours lovingly, Aarthi
Dear
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sugantha
,

How are you? Hope your work going well. I am writing this letter to
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let
you to share my delightful experience about carpet flower
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show
is going on grand palace, center of Brussels city.
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Started
from March 27th, Which I have
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went
along with my roommates. This
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show
is planned
for 5 days.

Buddy,
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Let
me brief about this
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event
.
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Event
will
be held
every 2 years once. Flowers
are decorated
in form of carpet and the president of Brussels will
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come
to visit. The carpet of
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77m
x24 m
is composed
by about 120 volunteers. Every year they had a theme and this year the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
is made
up of 600, 000 variety of flowers and the theme as African lye.

Since our college days, you have a great inclination on gardening and towards nature. I swear you will enjoy and admire this visit.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
you will
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get
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some
innovated
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ideas
and information to enhance your art and craft using this various species. My dear friend I have plan to re visit during this weekend. It would be
really
great if you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
with me.

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Please
hurry up bit in decision and share the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
at what time you will be reaching Brussels
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so
that I can pick you and enjoy the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
together.

Did you mean "awaiting" or "waiting for"?
Awaiting for
your replay.

Yours
lovingly
,

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Aarthi
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IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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