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Last week, you lost your luggage while travelling on holiday. Luckily, you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • Describe the characteristics of what you lost. • Explain how you lost it. • Tell the insurance company what you need from them.

Last week, you lost your luggage while travelling on holiday. Luckily, you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • Describe the characteristics of what you lost. • Explain how you lost it. • Tell the insurance company what you need from them. MMlV9
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to file an insurance claim for luggage that was lost during my holiday last week. The luggage is a green, medium-sized Samsonite model. Since this holiday was the first time it had been used, it should appear to be in good condition. Unfortunately, it does not have a luggage tag with my contact information. While I am not completely sure how the luggage was lost, I imagine that the airline might have placed it on a different flight. In fact, I have been in contact with the airline and they are almost certain that this is the most probable scenario. Before I left, I had taken out travel insurance with your company. Based on the information in the contract, lost luggage is covered. Therefore, I have attached the insurance claim and I would appreciate it if your company could review the approximated value of the luggage and process the attached claim as soon as possible. Please let me know if you require any other information. Yours faithfully, Madison Grey
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to file an insurance claim for
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luggage
that
was lost
during my holiday last week.

The
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luggage
is a green, medium-sized Samsonite model. Since this holiday was the
first
time it had been
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used
, it should appear to be in
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good
condition. Unfortunately, it does not have a
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luggage
tag with my contact information.

While I am not completely sure how the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
luggage
was lost
, I imagine that the airline might have placed it on a
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different
flight. In fact, I have been in contact with the
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airline and
they are almost certain that this is the most probable scenario.

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Before
I
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left
, I had taken out travel insurance with your
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company
. Based on the information in the contract, lost
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luggage
is covered
.
Therefore
, I have attached the insurance claim and I would appreciate it if your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
could review the approximated value of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
luggage
and process the attached claim as
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soon
as possible.

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Please
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let
me know if you require any other information.

Yours
faithfully
,

Madison Grey
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IELTS letter Last week, you lost your luggage while travelling on holiday. Luckily, you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • Describe the characteristics of what you lost. • Explain how you lost it. • Tell the insurance company what you need from them.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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