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Letter to friend seeking advice to change job.

Letter to friend seeking advice to change job. eExqA

Dear Martin, I hope you are well and are having a good time vacationing in England and visiting your family. I am writing to let you know that I am planning to switch my job. I have been working in the field of data analytics for almost 2 years now. It is indeed a high-paying job and I have been able to perform well until now. But, I still don't enjoy my work as it is more of a monotonous activity that I am doing each day. The work is repetitive and I am not getting enough opportunities to learn new skills. I have hence decided to switch to the field of software development as I believe that there is a lot of scope in this role to learn new things. With the technology changing each day, this would help me learn new skills and this is something that I have always longed for. Since you have been working as a software developer for quite some time now, I need you to share some tips and also help me figure out which companies should I target to get placed in? Also, as Microsoft is a great player in the field of software development, I would be grateful if you can refer me to your organization too. Hope to hear from you soon. Regards, Eshan

Dear Martin,

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good
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let
 you know that I am planning to switch my job.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have been working in the field of data analytics for almost 2 years This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. It is indeed
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now
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, I still
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repetitive and
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enough
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skills
. I have hence
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a lot of
 scope in this role to learn new things. With the technology changing each day, this would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me learn new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and this is something that I have always longed for.

Since you have been working as a software developer for quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, I need you to share This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 tips and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me figure out which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 should I target to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 placed in? Also
, as Microsoft is a great player in the field of software development, I would be grateful if you can refer me to your organization too. Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Regards,

Eshan